Stephani Final

This really isn't great. You marked it as "mature" which shows that there was sexiness intended, but there are some pretty major issues that need fixing.

The color scheme first of all-- The leggings are sort of diarrhea colored, which is never a good things. Also, you made the little chain under her breasts that color. Maybe make it brighter so you can see it, and give it a little white shine?

The hands are definitely problematic. I'll give you props, though. That's a very difficult position to draw hands in, and my suggestion is to maybe make the fingers longer, and less bulgy. She needs to look elegant, after all.

The hair is another major issue. I think you should start out with a bulkier, clearer shape before going in and doing all the intricate lines. That way there isn't a blob of detail that makes no sense.

Also, don't chicken out on the second hand. Maybe place it outside, on her forehead. That is so much sexier, instead of it covered by the massive monster blob of hair.

I don't really have problems with the face, besides the quality of your overall lines. I would choose a darker black to draw this in, especially with the message you're trying to convey.

The leg on the left as a sexy, clear shape. I'm pretty satisfied with it, except for the fact that it may be a tiny bit too long. The leg on the right has some pretty blunt perspective issues, but you're getting there. You could try some simpler poses before you tackle something like this?

The boobs are... Alright. The one on the right is up in her armpit, and could be lowered the slightest bit. I understand that they change somewhat when she's laying down, but it's somewhat extreme here.

The outfit is cute and original. I would make the bow a little bigger-- Not big enough to cover her shin, but big enough to be noticeable, and match the style of the rest of the piece. The coat tails are nice, but there are some crotch issues. You can squeeze the clothes line in a bit. Not change the shape of her crotch, but the shape of the clothes on it. More of a V-shape is sexier. You might also want to make the wrinkle closer to the outside, because right now it makes her either look like she has a gaping hole in her stomach, or a badly drawn penis.

The shoulder could also be broader on the right.

In the end-- I would not tackle this sort of pose just yet. If you're going to, I recommend stock images of women. Even then, I would stick to simpler positions so you can get a cleaner feel of anatomy and color schemes.

Thanks. c:

~Radioactivemongoose